this has been a wild ride through this story,there has been so many names and somany people it was hard to remember them all but so good

wow the black cocks can change even white well repected police women..give me more

this author has a great mind

I really can't wait to see how they blacken  Carol

I like the start of this it keeps me guessing and I will follow it to the end

Great start! Sorry I'm just getting into this now, but I really hope this keeps on going for years! The variety of characters, settings and situations is fantastic. Given that at least the three members of BlackShaft seem to have superpowers, I hope they face superpowered heroines at some point, but dealing with cops, the mafia, a private school and more really made this a massive world filled with possibilities. Really impressive stuff!

I can't believe I'm so invested in the characters of a porn story. Iron started off such a simple character back in the beginning with the two cops, but man, this really had a ton of character development. I'm really into this. Great job!

I can't believe I'd never found this before! This is great stuff. Superheroes and female cops falling to black guys is almost everything I'm into!

The only thing that seems like a bit of a missed opportunity is when the sex is just starting, then suddenly jumps to the end or even just stops and switches to a different scene with no climax. Since these stories are kind of centered around the sex, cutting that part out doesn't make too much sense to me. But the build up is great!

WOW, didn't expect to see that character again, but gives me hope that other characters might show up at least 1 more time (hoping to see Scarlet Queen for sure show for an absolutely mind blowing, super hot scene). Can't wait to see where all the diverging plots take us in season 2. Have we seen the last of Isabella? Will all the girls come back to St. Ignatious? What's next for Susan Coralli? And will Kacey's simmering black lust finally break loose? Is Corinne Allen a lesbian, or in a dominatrix/submissive relationship with Dannielle? If so, will Kacey or a domineering black stud be brought into the mix, or both? Questions I'm definitely looking forward to seeing explored or to seeing new plot twists altogether in the future. Keep up the great work, Rama. LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!

Nice twist with Isabella getting some come-uppance and the mob getting blamed for stealing from their own to divert suspicion! Liking the plot twists nearly as much as the sex scenes ( note, NEARLY-LOL) and thinking that  Susan Corralli might be someone to watch out for (she seems just a little bit unhinged to me) and can't wait to see what's in store for Season 2. Great story, Rama.

Loved the way this chapter ended, very interesting to see Kacey's dreams starting to have some effects on her and nice surprise with Daniella and Corrine being partners! Very cool! Definitely anxious to see what Isabella has coming to her and looking forward as always to what's next in store in"the season finale". Great work, Rama.

Can't wait to see what happens with Susan Corralli and especially that little bitch Isabella! Keep up the great work, Rama. Always look forward to another chapter of my favorite story.

Looking forward to seeing if Kacey's fantasies turn to reality for her, and to Ironrod's "teaching" those college girls ALOT more then they expected! And hoping we haven't seen the last of Scarlet Queen, that she's got one awesome, cum-filled finale for us yet!!!! Anyways, my favorite story keeps getting more interesting with twists and turns, Rama, and please keep up the good work.Love this story! 

Dr. Jones is turning out to be one hot slut, Jemma also, and all the cameras catching lots of other women in action is very interesting! But Princess's "solo" was the hottest scene for me by far this time! I like that she's "inexperienced" and that she had such a strong reaction to what she saw, having a strong sex drive at her age would be very natural, can't wait to see the next chapter!!!!

Liking Dr. Jones's backstory and the effects it has on her present. Kinda hoped Princess would stick around to watch the couple in the alley ( gotta think a heroine is more of a voyeur than anyone, looking into people's lives!), but definitely curious into what she's seen from her vantage point. And very interested into Jemma's reaction to the "perfume" and how many other women it may affect. Loving this story, Rama, and hoping for a very interesting turn of events when Scarlet returns to action, hopefully sooner rather than later! 

Well, Adrian Lime didn't have to put a lot of effort into having Jemma where he wanted her, and the after effects were very hot! Looking forward to seeing what is next in store for this story, especially to seeing who Lime's next oh-so-willing conquest is going to be! Loving this story, Rama, keep up the great work!!!!

The story is taking a different direction then I expected, but still enjoying it. Girl on girl isn't as exciting as male/female sex, but Stephanie's slow seduction by Claudia was very well done, a nice slow burn. The Club Noire scene and the bank scene were very hot, especially Samantha's reaction. Very cool! Hope to see more chapters very soon, keep up the great work! 

Was looking forward to Adrian Lime having his way with his 2 new pilots, but guessing Rama has better things in mind for him. Loved that Carol's a squirter, her scene with Patricia and the "swap", loved it, very nasty and very cool. Hoping Jane Gregg or possibly her secretary Danielle Holmes ( or both, YES!) are next, hopefully in the near future. Anxiously waiting for chapter 5, loving this story!

Can't wait to read about what Adrian Lime has in mind concerning Tiffany Storme, Allison Beach and her alter-ego. Looking forward to ALL the female characters getting some hard action, especially our 2 hot heroines maybe enjoying each other before succumbing to multiple big black cocks! Loving this story so far, hope to see more soon!

Loving this story! Hoping it gets continued sooner rather than later, and looking forward to ALL of the female characters having at least one hot scene, especially the 2 heroines. Great work!

Just wanted to say I'm loving the story so far. I really, REALLY hope you stick with it. I joined the site for the Pit's artwork, but with both you and Thickwil putting out such great stories, this section of the site has become the main draw for me. I especially loved the scene where the three girls all had to drop to their knees and pledge their loyalty to black men. Super hot... 

Keep up the excellent work.