I like the use of the spiked and ecstasy to heighten the sexual excitement of actually all the female characters it just show who out of control they all become, I think this exclusive interview is only the begining of this illustrated story. the real investigative work hasn't,t started yet.  I think the spiked water will be accidentally discovered by someone maybe Jessica or maybe another reporter. I think this is only the beginiing, although I do enjoy the total out of control urges these girls have.

I was thinking,maybe indicating there is some rap music going on towards the last few pixs and then the last pix is Tom Watkins waking up from a dream, on his couch in his living room; on the flat screen tv he see's Jessica McFarland behind the desk giving the news of the day and also promoting a live interview with a rap group for the next day. Also to the right of Jessica , standing in front of a weather map is the waather girl, Shara.

previous to them taking off Jessica's panties , I would love to see them take off her shoes , stockings and garter, so eventually she's totally nude to the public, where she has nothing left to  hide.  I think the story is great

Ah Thickwil, you clever bastard! And I mean that in THE most complimentary way, because in all the stories I've read, erotic or otherwise, I've NEVER had a story catch my attention or hold me on the edge of my seat like the last sentence in chapter 19 of Exclusive. WELL DONE!!! Next chapter much, much sooner rather than later. Loving it!

PLEASE, PLEASE don't keep us in suspense any longer!Loving this story and can't wait to see (read?) the Davenport women in action, and (hopefully?) a group sex scene with all the females in a free-for-all with all the black dudes before the finish. Can't wait for the next chapter!  

LOve it

on a scale 1-10... 11.  

Fuck! Fuck, fuck, fuck! I love this story! PLEASE keep it going. I want to see how Jessica deals with her hubby afterwards, not to mention how hot it would be to see her starring in a Black Phallus video. And Becky... Becky and Sarah's mom... So much territory left to cover.

This story is off the chain.  I am really enjoying it!!!  Can't wait to read Chap. 12.  One of the best "on-going" series I have ever read!!!

Chapter 8 is incomplete: can you fix this?

The beginning of a soon-to-be classic interracial story.  The writing style is excellent.  The seduction, tricks, and humor used by the author is found rarely combined so well.  Simply an all-time favourite story.

Awesome, very detailed and devilishly funny. Keep up the great work.

-OMG, I love this story..by-far the best part of the story is how Sarah is introduced as a major religious woman who doesn't believe in cursing or premarital sex and preaches these same beliefs to her baby sister..I love how it ends with her screaming at the top of her lungs JESUS FUCKING CHRIST!! as she is bent over her own desk getting her virgin pussy fucked from behind by a big black dick while titty fucking and sucking another guys sweaty black balls..one shoots his load inside of her while making her scream that she was a virgin 4'hours ago and how she was soon to be married..the part where she is gathering herself after her first fuck, still sweaty, she calls her baby sister with sweat and cum all over her face..(really HOT)..Can't wait to read about Jessica and if she will ever get the fucking she deserves, from a black dick.  This story is perfect, very detailed, beautiful story telling for adults...10/10

First rate...and a great start. The story is just as addictive as the artwork!! I hope the next chaper is on its way!

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