I am guessing this is experimental because you wrote it from the man’s POV which you did amazingly well! I really enjoyed it, and I love how your heroine not only gets off on interracial sex, but, sneaking around on her white boyfriends. All in all, a fun read. You should take you experiment further, come up with a basic plot and write it with someone else you doing one main character’s POV and letting someone else doing another main character’s POV and then switching off, it will force you to deal with a lot of unexpected change ups. Well, another great read!