Reviews For Breakout
Title: Chapter 6: Always Have A Plan - part 1 Reviewer: Subjectivity Anonymous

More oral and anal! Fantastic! But it's tragic that nobody ever came!

Date: 11/25/16 09:44 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 4: The Naked Truth Reviewer: Subjectivity Anonymous

Mouth and ass! My favorite! Heh. The taking of Allison's ass was great, but I was sad it cut out again when Bo finally took Jaimie's butt. Still, great chapter! Shame about the weird characters that somehow ended up in there. I had to edit them out myself.

Date: 11/25/16 05:44 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 6: Always Have A Plan - part 2 Reviewer: Dille78 Signed

Really GREAT story :) Hope you can post some more

 

Date: 10/30/14 08:50 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Emily Jessell Reporting Reviewer: blondie Anonymous

I would have liked a mental picture of Emily.Also a little back ground on her.Up bring,married,racist,on the pill,things like that

Date: 01/27/11 02:52 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 6: Always Have A Plan - part 2 Reviewer: RonMan Anonymous

Really great story. But please give us more about the movie production. Id like detailed descriptions on the girls get off during the scens.

 

Thanks for the story.

Date: 12/13/10 10:47 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Emily Jessell Reporting Reviewer: simple7 Signed

Great story!!

Date: 12/11/10 07:32 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Emily Jessell Reporting Reviewer: Thickwil Signed
Amazing story! I'm very impressed by the way you've concisely woven so many ideas (a reporter, nurses, prisoners, and cops) and kept it so hot. It makes me kind of ashamed of my writing!

Author's Response:

Thanks, Thickwil.

The biggest problem was geetting the sex into the last part while wrapping up the storylines. I think I got most of them. There is a couple of spin-off stories in there I have in mind, but now it looks like Emily will be coming back as well...

Oh, and I am loving your stories. Very hot, very slutty and very enjoyable!

Date: 12/11/10 04:42 pm [Report This]


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